2018考研英語一大作文真題解析

　　下面是2018年考研英語一大作文真題解析：以供廣大考生估分作參考。

　　Directions:

　　Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should

　　1) describe the picture briefly,

　　2) interpret the meaning, and

　　3) give your comments.

　　Write your answer neatly on the ANSWER SHEET (20 points)

　　In front of a desktop sits a young boy who is staring at the screen and selecting the curriculum. Apparently, a trace of hesitancy showed in his eyes. He is considering whether to choose the courses which are high scored, easily passed with less homework, or to choose those that contain new knowledge, focus on creating and are difficult to learn.

　　The implication echoed by this cartoon can be summarized as a philosophic topic in our daily life：the success of a man is closely related to the choice made by himself. Nevertheless, I cherish a belief that we cannot tell whether the selection is good or not, and as long as we adhere to our decision, success will be realized step by step. Although making a choice is essential to help determine the direction of our way, judged from the personal aspect, persistence functions as an indispensable driving force to keep up our spirit and to assist us to fulfill our study and work. However, some people, pacing up and down, are not industrious and try to find a short-cut success. In fact, only those who are hard-working and brave enough to encounter obstacles of all sorts are most likely to reach the summit of success.

　　Accordingly, persistence and making our own decision rationally are badly needed in every aspect of our society. In order to bring out this potential capability, our education system is supposed to be reformed fundamentally, focusing on cultivating the ability of confronting challenges. As an old saying goes:“No pain, no gain.”

　　一如既往，今年的英語一還是考查了圖畫作文。B節(jié)作文的評(píng)分重點(diǎn)在于內(nèi)容完整性、文章的組織連貫性、語法結(jié)構(gòu)及詞匯的多樣性與語言的準(zhǔn)確性。就我看來，今年英語一大作文考查有難度。首先，圖畫的描述比較難。從表面上看，本篇作文的題目或題材似乎是大家都十分熟悉的。但實(shí)際上對(duì)考生提出了更高的要求。作為即將接受研究生教育的高校學(xué)生，必須學(xué)會(huì)從多樣化或較為復(fù)雜的角度來考慮和分析、解決問題，因?yàn)樯钪械脑S多問題絕非低層次作文中“問題-原因-解決”的“單一鏈條”關(guān)系那樣簡單。

　　按照要求，本作文需要包括三個(gè)組成部分：(1)描述圖畫;(2)分析圖畫的用意或內(nèi)在含義;(3)就此話題表達(dá)個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)或提出建議。

　　(1)描述圖畫：描寫或描述的一般要求是“準(zhǔn)確”和“生動(dòng)”。這里考慮到文章寫作的因素，還要增加一個(gè)“合理”方面的考慮。正如圖畫所描述的那樣，一個(gè)同學(xué)在選課時(shí)陷入猶豫之中。他在考慮是選擇“知識(shí)新、重創(chuàng)新和有難度”的，還是選擇“給分高、易通過和作業(yè)少”。

　　(2)分析圖畫的用意或內(nèi)在含義：圖畫的描述僅僅是文章的“切入點(diǎn)”，分析才是文章的核心所在。如果說準(zhǔn)確、生動(dòng)、合理是對(duì)描述的基本要求的話，那么，系統(tǒng)、深入則是對(duì)于分析得基本要求。所謂“系統(tǒng)”首先是要承接上文，以對(duì)圖畫中關(guān)于“選擇”展開分析。這樣才能保證文章從內(nèi)容到形式的系統(tǒng)性或整體性。其次，分析必須循著“選擇”這一線索展開。所謂“深入”，是指分析要透徹，要觸及問題的實(shí)質(zhì)。選擇很重要，選擇之后的堅(jiān)持和努力更重要。

　　(3)就此話題表達(dá)個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)或提出建議：發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，重要的是要考慮到觀點(diǎn)的“中的”和“合理”。觀點(diǎn)應(yīng)切中要害、盡管本篇作文的觀點(diǎn)會(huì)因人而異，但大體上應(yīng)該包括這樣幾點(diǎn)：一是合理選擇;二是堅(jiān)持努力;三是培養(yǎng)學(xué)生面臨困難和挑戰(zhàn)的能力。

　　同以往的命題寫作一樣，應(yīng)注意：1)突出中心。避免偏頗。2)結(jié)構(gòu)完整。三個(gè)大的組成部分不能缺少，每個(gè)組成部分所占的比重要合理。3)避免錯(cuò)誤。拼寫、語法等方面要小心，盡量避免不應(yīng)有的錯(cuò)誤。4)句式變換。盡量避免用同樣的句式寫作，否則會(huì)給人以單一、乏味的感覺。當(dāng)然，句式的變換不是為了變換本身，而是為了更好地表達(dá)思想，為了讀者更好地理解。5)增加“亮點(diǎn)”。寫作中應(yīng)該通過精準(zhǔn)的表述、適度的引用等方式制造“亮點(diǎn)”，以加深讀者的印象。由于考生的“讀者”就是閱卷人，這種“亮點(diǎn)”自然有利于提高作文的成績。

　　從今年的考題來看，谷老師認(rèn)為：歷年的考研寫作準(zhǔn)備，一定要以真題為主!從近些年的考頻來說，牢記“真題為重”!比如2005和2014年都考到了“養(yǎng)老”的問題;今年的主題跟2013年的“選擇”聯(lián)系緊密。另外，2009年考到的“網(wǎng)絡(luò)”跟2015年考過的“手機(jī)”也有很多關(guān)聯(lián)。所以，大家一定要重視真題!